แนะนำตัวภาษาอังกฤษษษษษษษษ

[assasip]

อยากจะขอความช่วยจากชาว Joker หน่อยครับ
ผมได้รับงานการแนะนำตัวเป็นภาษาอังกฤษหน้าห้องเป็นเวลา 5 นาที แต่ผมไม่รู้จะพูดอะไรดีตั้ง 5 นาที !

อันนี้เป็นงานที่ผมพิมพ์ไว้แล้ว

Good morning teacher and my friend today I'll introduce myself .My name is ____________.You can just call me ___.
My birthday is __________ . I'm __ years old.I was born and raised from Bangkok Thailand.
I graduate from ___________ school science and math major.
My family have a 5 person.I have Father Mother and 2 older sister.I am youngest.
Currenty I am first years student in Electronic and computer system Farculty of engineering and Industrial Technology.
At ___________ University. About my family , My father is Salesman My mother is Hairdresser My elder sister is
Designer and My younger sister is second years student in Educational technology farculty of education at __________university.
My hobbie is play computer game listen to music and read magazine.My favourite sport is basketball tabletennis and batminton.
My favourite food is grill chicken and steam egg .it' so delicious.
My favourite day is new year days because My family spend time and travel together.
In the future I want to be programmer also I tired to learn all about computer and technology for improve my skill
My favourite star movie is captain america because he's brave strong and honest .My artist is
My idol is taylor swift because she have a beautiful song or else Your belong with me or 22 .

อยากให้ช่วยคิดหน่อยว่าเอาอะไรดี = ,= ส่วนตัวอักษรที่หนา คือ อยากให้แก้ให้หน่อย ไม่รู้จะพิมพ์ยังไง รบกวนช่วยหน่อยนะครับ นั่งคิดมานานละ zZzZzZzZz

[parisj007]

= = แก้ she have a beautiful songs เป็น she writes good songs ครับ

[oMAIL258]

Good morning teacher and my friends today I'll introduce myself .My name is ____________.You can just call me ___.
My birthday is __________ . I'm __ years old.I was born and raised in Bangkok Thailand.
I graduated from ___________ school science and math major.
My family has a people ,father ,mother ,2 older sisters and I am the youngest.
Currently I am first year student in Electronic and computer system Faculty of engineering and Industrial Technology.
At ___________ University. About my family , My father is a Salesman My mother is Hairdresser My elder sister is
Designer and My younger sister is a second years student in Educational technology faculty of education at __________university.
My hobby is playing computer games, listening to music and read magazine.My favorite sport is basketball table tennis and badminton.
My favorite food is grilled chicken and steam egg .They are so delicious.
My favorite day is New Year day because My family spend time and travel together.
In the future I want to be a programmer ,so I'm learning about all computers and technologies to improve my skills.
My favorite actor is Captain America because he's brave strong and honest .
My artist idol is Taylor Swift because she writes so many good songs such as "You belong with me" and "22".

ผมแก้แกรมม่าส่วนนึงให้ละครับ แต่ก็ยังมีเหลืออีกเยอะเหมือนกันไม่อยากยุ่งมาก xD สู้ๆคับ

[assasip]

คิดไม่ออกละ ว่าจะเพิ่มอะไรดี 5555 ขอบคุณมากครับ ช่วยได้มากเลย

[SlimZ]

เพิ่มทักษะ ความสามารถ ของเราไงครับ

[animeth]

Good morning teacher and my friends today I'll introduce myself .My name is ____________.You can just call me ___.
My birthday is __________ . I'm __ years old.I was born and raised in Bangkok Thailand.
I graduated from ___________ school science and math major.
My family has a people ,father ,mother ,2 older sisters and I am the youngest.
Currently I am first year student in Electronic and computer system Faculty of engineering and Industrial Technology.
At ___________ University. About my family , My father is a Salesman My mother is Hairdresser My elder sister is
Designer and My younger sister is a second years student in Educational technology faculty of education at __________university.
My hobbys are playing computer games, listening to musics and read magazines.
My favorite sports are basketball, table tennis and badminton.
My favorite food are grilled chicken and steam egg .They are so delicious.
My favorite day is New Year day because My family spend time and travel together.
In the future I want to be a programmer ,So i'm learning about all computers and technologies to improve my skills.
My favorite actor is Captain America because he's brave strong and honest .
My artist idol is Taylor Swift because she writes so many good songs such as "You belong with me" and "22".

แก้ไขนิดหน่อยๆจากด้านบนนี้นะครับ

[macnum10]

Good morning ladies and gentlemen. I will introduce myself today. First, my name is ___ but you can just call me ___.
My birthday is in ___ so now I am ___ years old. I was born and raised in Bangkok, Thailand.
I have graduated from ___ school with a mathematics and science major.
My family consists of 5 people. My dad, my mom, my two 2 older sisters, and me. I am the youngest.
Currently, I am a first year student in an electronic and computer system faculty of an engineering and industrial technology at ___ university.
Apart from that, my father works as a salesman. My mother works as a hairdresser. My older sister works as a designer and my younger sister is still learning in educational technology faculty of education at ___ university. She is a second years student now.
My favorite hobbies are playing computer games, listening to music, and reading magazines.
My favorite sports are basketball, table tennis, and badminton.
My favorite food are grilled chicken and steam egg. There are very delicious.
My favorite day is a New Year day because my family always spend time and travelling together.
My favorite actor is Captain America because he is so brave, strong, and honest.
My favorite artist idol is Taylor Swift because she have written so many good songs like "You belong with me" and "22".
In the future, I want to be a programmer. With that, I am learning about all computers and technologies to improve my skills.

[escess1991]

My family has a people ,father ,mother ,2 older sisters and I am the youngest. ฟังดูแปลกๆนะครับ ถ้าเป็นผมผมจะพูดว่า i live together with dad mom and two older sisters.

In the future, I want to be a programmer. With that, I am learning about all computers and technologies to improve my skills. ใช้แบบนี้ก็โอนะครับ แต่ว่า ตัด in the future ออกได้นะครับ พูดไปเลยว่าอยากเป็นอะไร i wanna be a programmer so i work hard on com and tech class and try hard on my exam.อะไรทำนองนี้ครับ ผมไม่เก่งแกรมม่า จำได้แค่ ประธานเอกพจน์ กิริยาเติม s มีหลายอย่างใช้ are แค่นี้ละมั้งครับ

ปล.สมัยผมได้พูดหน้าห้องแบบนี้ ผมหาจากอากู๋ครับ เปลี่ยนแค่ชื่อกับอะไรอีกไม่กี่อย่าง ไม่มานั่งคิดเองหรอกครับ แต่แบบนี้ก็ดีแล้วหละครับ ได้พัฒนาทักษะการคิดด้วย

[L4ST7T4ND]

พูด 5 นาที ?!! พระเจ้า ยาวมาก นี่มัน IETLS Speaking Part 3 เลยนะเนี่ย

ผมแนะนำฝึกเรื่อง Coherence และ Pronouciation ครับ